"Twenty years isn't that long," and other old-person things I never thought I'd say.
Mesmerizing but I feel like the ending could benefit from a rework - it just … ends… and on an off-rhythm at that. Maybe one more short paragraph or even sentence may do the trick.
Bravo
Mesmerizing but I feel like the ending could benefit from a rework - it just … ends… and on an off-rhythm at that. Maybe one more short paragraph or even sentence may do the trick.
Bravo